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Oct. 10th, 2004 @ 04:16 pm
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origionally i was going to have this take place in a school atmosphere at first so this was before the dream i shared priorly
The school atmosphere presented another mindless day in the world. A day where each person would go from one place to another, autonomously. But today was a different day. Today was a day in which the minds of the school would be connected, the thoughts of the souls would converge. A day where the pristine minds of the individuals would be envisioned in the heart of a single man. This man would view the souls of mankind. His name is Odysseus.
it kinda explains the point more... once i decide how the day's events will occur then i will reedit this... The entire story will only be a day long, that is my goal.... heh, fun fun fun |
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Oct. 10th, 2004 @ 02:57 pm
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Well, i decided to begin my story. I am going to write an epic novel about a day in a person's life. The intro was inspired by a movie I watched yesterday greatly encompassing my thoughts and ideas. I will begin the story with a dream, it is written in third person, but the dream of course will be in first, along with other parts of the story, due to the nature I am writting it. This story I hope will encompass the life and minds of all characters which interact in it, to the point that in the end of one single day, you will understand utterly why each character is who they are, why each character does what they do... You will understand the mind entirely of all who is interacted in a day, this is my goal, and I will attain this throguh my version of Stream of Consiousness... I have yet to read a book written in Stream of Consiousness, but this will be... if utterly diffrent then how any other has utilyzed it, then i will be happy only the name correlates our writting, if not, i will be surprised i thought on my own a way to write which correlates with another's seemingly unique thought, one of my theories explained in a movie, odd, how thoguhts always correlate...
Here is the intro
-it was a dark alley engulfed by an unearthly deep red fog. A man encroached from the corner and stood before me. Who am I? It does not matter. The man had a power to him, a power which made me feel as though I knew him, I was one with him. His dark flowing trench coat, his deep brown eyes, so dark they nearly appeared black, his perfectly straight stance, his perfect build, all these things held ominously in my mind as being something surreal. ‘There are many minds in this world, what makes you think yours is unique?’ he asks in a deep authoritarian voice. ‘We all go throughout this world, questioning, wondering, craving a life in which we are separate from it all, while still yearning to be connected through socializing. We think, act, dream independently from others, yet not one has usually a unique thought. To understand what has already been thought, to connect to the stream, one begins to understand the minds and hearts of all. I am connected to the stream, I know all thoughts all dreams all minds. Are you?’
Staring into his eyes, I noticed I was beginning to rise. I look to my feet to notice they were inches, then feet, away from the cold dark black cement. The red fog began to swirl around my body as though it was encompassing me into utter darkness. I began to panic, I tried to swarm to the ground, reach the floor, ask a question to this mysterious man at least, but I couldn’t. My body was aching, I couldn’t move my muscles, confusion engulfed my mind. Where am I, what is going on? What is going on… |
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Oct. 3rd, 2004 @ 10:40 pm
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ooo btw i am working on a new layout, i really can't stand this one, i will have it up hopefully soon, especially since i can get working on the comptuer again now.... soon as i get this work out of the way i should have at least a temp one up, so i will say for a tenative date of at least a temp is the end of the week, though of course with my notorious procrastionation, it will be alot later :-p
Oh and also, i'm going to have a few posts on here that are public, ie the one i will make tomorrow with the pics from "gender bender day" but essentially everything will be friends only so don't be surprised if you don't see many entries later less ur added |
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Sep. 26th, 2004 @ 04:15 pm
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Hey I decided so i can write freely, i am going to make my posts so that only friends can read them, ya so if you want me to add ya just leave a comment, if you left one before your prb added... heh now my journal looks empty... i was stupid enough to erase all my past entrieds cause i didn't think i could just change em all over to friends list... ohh well |
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